get rid of the filter

also, the rhythm is way off. His arm is too squeezed in. The face looks detached from the rest of his body. His tummy and arms are out of proportion. You need to work on your anatomy a lot more. I recommend finding the book Artistic Anatomy by Joseph Sheppard.

Ooh~

I really like his face
<3

Wow

This is pretty good. I kinda get Haruko (from FLCL) vibe from this dude, but I don't know why. Oh well, keep up the good work.