Good message, well presented

I like how catchy this looks and it could certainly be a birthday card of some description in the making. I'm not sure that any female friend or relative of mine would really like to see this in a card instead of the more traditional Happy Birthday message, but there you go.

The cheeky monkey message below is a nice touch - the tongue in cheek part of the presentation, giving everyone a lovely message that all is not entirely serious.

I like the colour scheme and the font that you chose for it, as this is functional presentation, that is easy to read - such things can be over or underdone from time to time, preventing the impact, that a piece like this can deliver. The four colour pallet is just what is required for this piece and all is well.

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Well...

Despite that the face is the only thing you drew and the rest of the fonts were just typed, I just can't complain because it's true.

I agree...but

I agree n' all, but the same goes for women....

Well... except the swagging part.... I guess..

Judging the Piece.

Man, judging only your piece, it was nicely put and well concepted - congrats.

But I'd like to take the opportunity to say women need their own ambitions, education and goals - so they can pay their own bills and do whatever the hell they like.

It's a question of freedom of choice - even if that choice goes for swaggering.