I feel this could've benefited from a solid nonblack outline of some sort, the pose is stiff and awkward as well....work on your gestures. The face is also not appealing.... perhaps devote some time to figuring out what makes faces appealing/getting more accuracy in your likenesses.
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The lead singer of the rock band Scandal, Patty Smyth, as she appeared in the music video for their 1983 song "The Warrior".
I just sort of felt the need to make something extremely 80's. :)
Critiques are appreciated.
solidpawn responds:
I confess faces were never my strength. ":) I'll try to rework it from concrete reference material and also try to get the pose to feel more natural.
When you say a solid non-black outline, do you mean an outline to differentiate from the background, or something to define the color edges more naturally?
Thank you for your advise! I really appreciate it.
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