As a massive fan of Fear and Loathing in Las Vegas I was instantly drawn to this piece when I saw it in The Review Request Club. I think that you have missed something by not making it more Ralph Steadman inspired with the think swooping black lines and deliberate ink splats. what I'm saying is that it is hard to create a fan piece for something with as distinct an illustrated style without paying homage to that.
Taking that aside you have created a decent sketch here. It just appears to be unfinished and needs more though put into it. Ideas, like maybe the ash/smoke turning into bats.
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