Off the topic, i really dig the brushes you used, the crayon look makes the piece looks alot creepier, i know you did this as a joke but none the less, it works well. I've noticed recently that you've gotten better with hands, so dont worry about that, what i think you need to work on are faces. Now the last piece of work you did, the fan art piece, had a really nice distintive facial construct with high appeal. I believe if you gravitate towards that, your work will pop out alot more and will be more bold as a whole. As is for this piece, the face looks kind disjointed, soo maybe you should set yourself a goal to create a more varied structure when drawing facial expressions. As for the anatomy, everything seems all good, the head is a bit too thin and maybe the boobs need some more work, but everything seems in order so far. The colours are nice, too, blending well with that creepy aesthetic that you may or may not have been going for.

While i dont like the theming, i can see where you were going for, my biggest dissappointment however was with the face, which i honestly thought you improved upon in your last piece, i hope you can learn from what you did there and develop on it in work to come.

Haha, this is awesome. I wanna do something like this, LOL. If you don't mind.