Mermaids can be very devious and promise treasure but are just delusions of granduer
Sailor's catch
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This is not sexually charged at all! hahaha Positive criticism on how this piece could be improved is welcomed :)
serenekitchen responds:
i like mermaids because they have promise of sexual defiance but obviously don't have the parts to do the job
you give a hard task, since this is already an amazing piece! but i´ll try
-On the fith look the belly of the right nymph seems a bit crowded.
-Dont know about the backround - i like it - if really messin with it i would
add more dead fish and a sterile metal bassin so to transfer the scene to nowadays fishin-industry...
-maaaybe there could be at least a little bit of an (not necessarily human) eye
greets
serenekitchen responds:
thanks for your positive critique! composition of an illustration is always a headache but i liked how you picked up things i didnt :)
Very, very nice indeed :) maybe you could add some shells or something in the background so you have less negative space. or you could even add a pattern or something
serenekitchen responds:
ok! i'll try to rethink the background, was originally planning to put the a shipping wooden deck as the background but it clashed too much with the netting bleh
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