Hmmm....

You got potential dude, been seeing other of your art, just need to get right with anatomy (thing like, a body is equal to seven heads of its own and somestuff like that), and the feet is equal the size of the head, and the eye should be more on the center of the head, and her torso is way too long, but i think thats lack of knowledge, if you get a tutorial on internet or something like that, im sure you get better, ;D hoping good works from you dude