I admit that this didn't look that good at first. When I took a closer look, I realized how awesome it was! It's just great to see something so realistic. This really looks like it was drawn in real life. I mean, with chalk or something that you just copied on a printer. This does show strong emotion.
It's nice to see such joy. I hope you did well on your project. Just show them this score and they'll be sure to like it! I'm not quite sure what that thing on her arm is. I think it's just some black thing.