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Score
4.03 / 5.00

Date
06/18/2010
Category
Fine Art
File Info
751 x 1000 px
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555.3 kb
Tags
child
portrait
vanessa
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Author Comments

Hello guys, I'm uploading something, yehaaw.

First part of a commisioned work - two portraits of children.

My hand hurts so much!

size: ca. A5
time: ca. 6h
medium: pencil hb, 4b, 4h

The other part will be uploaded later today (or tomorrow, I'm not sure about that)
It was rather difficult to draw her, cause the ref-photo was so emotionless.. The second one is better, for sure. Hope you like it either!

Greetz

Reviews


moonsteammoonsteam

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars Jun 20, 2010

Awesome work

Just passing through, browsing the art.

So you do really very well with hair, many people tend to have trouble pulling it off, and I like how you added the random stray hairs.
I feel as though the only problem is you could have distinguished the nose a little more, it seems to almost blend in with the rest of her face.
Otherwise, go you! Keep it up, you draw wonderfully. :)


Pohmme-d-adham responds:

wow thanks for your review. Yeah about the nose... When I thought I'm done with this piece the nose comes out of her face pretty well. I scanned it and send it to the comissioner. And her critique was the nose, I had to remove the shadows. I did not agree with her. but she had se money, so this is, how it turns out.
But thanks for your opinion! I love to read good comments, which includes constructive critique as well. Helps me a lot!