Not a bad drawing, and after reading the description I feel I'm still a little confused as to the original point that your trying to portray. but again it's not bad at all. It is a little busy at the bottom of the page and it's hard to distinguish what is going on, but you can definitely tell there is some form of chaos that your intellectual "angle" (?) is viewing at a safe distance. Keep making drawings, you really do have good talent and I want to view much more from you.