Great work, I say, of course.

Linguistics as part of an aesthetic, it's interesting. Sadly I wonder if there is not something always, always, lost in every kind of translation - because, everything is an attempt at communication, in some form, or another.
It can be fun to try these translations sometimes, though. And I would wager the translation attempts, even if a bit is lost, is still worth trying. I bet there certainly must be something gained at some point. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Elder_Futhark