Author
Alexa (Nanagotano)
Date Submitted
07/01/2009 | 10:59PM EST
Category & Size
Illustration | 600 x 869 px
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The People Have Spoken
Average Score: 9.3 / 10
nice smooth textures and tones u did a great job make more
nice technique and nice tones choice,I like the pastel colors, it fit well for creating a luminous atmosphere, one little thing that sting me is the neck thickness...personally i wouldn't drawn the left side line that much apart from the chin if you get my point, a thinner neck closer to the shoulder would make it perfect i believe.
smooth lines and grey scale tones, very artistic pose along with the blend of her leg to the strange break up... the hair seems to be lacking some what at the back of the head... i hope you see what i mean... overall a good job, i feel you might need to take a break and look at the whole thing to see what may be wrong... or get a friend to look... it helps you pick out small mistakes...