You need to work on gesture drawings. This is really stiff.
Blake Belladonna from Rooster Teeth's RWBY
dA link: http://mikomikisomi.deviantart.com/art/Blake-Belladonna-Speedpaint-488157926
Speedpaint: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x5tk-fd8vpM
You need to work on gesture drawings. This is really stiff.
Sorry you think that. I got tips on how to draw this from a lot of different people and they said it looked okay. Obviously it's not the top-tier of anatomy and form drawings but I wouldn't say she looks completely stiff.
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