The art is nice
The art is good here very good rich in detail nice comic style aswell not too many frames here but I'm thinking so things stand out even more maybe we could get the frames or borders as some like to call them make them more thicker even adding some color to them would be a plus on things. Just something
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Possibly but maybe not. The borders frames could be thicker
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DaveRooder responds:
Page 2 : https://mavruda.deviantart.com/art/A-Hope-page-2-640791711
There's page 3, but things at that time went somehow bad to me and never made to finish it.
Ah, Planet of the Apes! Reference is clear right from the start, though the plot's... hard to get into yet. Is it the first part of the three? Feels like you really jump into a scenario you know nothing about. No prologue. But will be interesting to see where it leads. Artwise: not bad!
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DaveRooder responds:
Not part of any of the mentioned. It's in timeline somewhere in between. It is going to be very short story. People are not important in this or at least they don't seem to be important at all. I'm putting two characters/apes against one each other - ... sadly it will look somehow shallow instead of detailed and deep into their personality. As I wrote on DA - it's for upcoming interview - and I'm kinda rushing. 2 more pages to come
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