Author's Comments
and so... another picture to add to my collection... this was done for a collab and thus i chose to do zelda... if you dont know who she is... then where have you been!?... as always... if there is ANYTHING wrong with her... let me know... from the slightest details to major issues... im thinking about resizing her below the weist beacuse she looks a bit top heavy :P...
so... comments and crit highly welcome...
The People Have Spoken
Average Score: 8.9 / 10
I of course saw the boobs but I actually got pulled in seeing the triforce. Overall it looks amazing! I see massive tops seem to be a big portrion of your stuff so far but they just look kinda wrong with zelda. Also the one thing that stands out to me is the hair. something about the angle of her face and her hair dosen't line up to me maybe I'm just looking at this the wrong way tho.
if its from hero of time then the problem here is the instrument
only played the 64 games so thyr isnt much a i can tell about
srry
Author's Response:
i think i based this one from the brawl version :3
But I thoght she had blond hair.
Author's Response:
does she?... i had to go find a picture to make this... i only played the N64 OOC, MM, a few earlyer games and brawl... and im still sure she has brown :P
Overall I like it, there's only one thing I can spot that I think you should fix and that would be the crown and hair. It looks like the crown is tilted towards that one eyebrow because it's really high up on the right side. The hair on the right side bulges up just a little too far I think. Anyways, 8/10, I'm giving you a 4/5.
Author's Response:
i can see what you meen... basic flaw that i overlooked while rushed :(... thank you for pointing that out...
yeah you could done a lot better though but its alright
Author's Response:
i was trying out a new style and was rushed for time... i know its not my best but i would like to see what i could improve on instead of people saying (yeah its ok... but it could be better)... what could be better!?... the whole point of a review is to tell me what you think of it, and what to improve... :S
It looks good. Better than whatever I could have done. The only problems are the pose and the Ocarina. They both look a little odd...
Author's Response:
i did the ocarina from memory so i dont know how close i am to it... and yeah... its got alot of flaws with it... thanks for the crit...
Great one on the background, colors and details. Only thing I dislike is her pose, she seems a little weird how she is standing there. Maybe shes uncomfortable with her new implants :P
Author's Response:
yeah yeah... i know... i really need to size them down ALOT... il get to work on it after i finish a few other projects i got going on... thanks for the amusing review... i like the title alot :P
Hey there, I really like this picture, it really captures Zelda from Twilight Princess, but with the Ocarina of time in her hand, it makes her bonded with the Zelda of Ocarina of Time, nice coloring though. Hey I'm trying to do the Legend of Zelda art collab, do you want in?
Author's Response:
so... i should drop the OOT reference?... give her something else in her hand?... and il see how it pans out with your art collab before i join... lots of stuff going on you see :3
look forward to seeing that collab
Author's Response:
me as well... :3
i see what people are saying about the top heavyness and all but id also work on the eyes a little more maybe. i bet you could give more life to them with more work!
~anyways really great job! ^__^
Author's Response:
i see what you meen... they are a little dark... i was trying out a new way of drawing/colouring... thats why alot of the lines are a bit wobbly due to the mouse... and i was trying to use block colours instead of gradients... *apart from the braiding in the hair*... this picture could use with alot more work, but i was rushed and had only 3 hours... will work on it when i have some spare time again... thanks for your view...
Nice job
Author's Response:
this responce doesnt help me in the slightest :(
Really well made, I love the coloring, and the backgrounds are really smooth, making it comfortable to look at. I don't have much to say but; good job!
About her breasts then... yes, they are oversized. But if you see the Zelda from Twilight and Brawl, she actually isn't breast-less! And such things comes with your own interpretation. It's not a true fanart picture if you're just trying to do an exact copy!
Great job anyways!
Author's Response:
alright... il down size her brests... il make sure i do that first seen as that seems to be the main issue here... might throw in a few more hours of work to get it to a better standard as well
The only thing that looks odd is with her arm under her chest. It seems to be swallowed up. That may be the "top heavy" but that's all I can complain about with you.
Author's Response:
il resize her breasts and sort out her skirt... take some of the plumpness from the top and add to the skirt
Everyone knows zelda doesn't have boobs.
Author's Response:
shhhh keep that to yourself... well... i supose they are rather large come to think about it :P
