love it
you got an amazing shot here, people can spend years trying to capture and express the industrial romanticism that built the developed world, and that we see all around us. the black n white brings out that grim dirty grittiness that realists seem to love about cities.
one thing i would change is the writing, i'd just have it in different colours, some of letters on the train don't show up well enough, i can't read the "late freight".