Great texture and color

You have some Great texture and color use in like with the clothing really nice detail there, I could see you adding some sparkle on the beautiful looking eyes here, Both female characters consist of very dark sharp line work, That and the exaggerated anatomical and facial features favor a cartoon animated style, Nevertheless the visible sheen and individual locks of hair provide depth and keep them from resembling flat cartoon styles The sunset background works well with the warm colors of their outfits as well as their golden amber eyes, Implemented shadows shading highlight their setting and place them into it nicely, Again they are kept from appearing too flat, The vertical layout allows for the entirety of their bodies to be shown alongside the perspective being for viewers looking up, That coupled with facial expressions of the two females and the setting time generates an intense suspenseful tone.

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I could see you adding some sparkle on the beautiful looking eyes here

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great

its like an urban animes /cartoon look
funny alot of people from new york is trying to do a stlye
inc operation thou's elements

Heads look a tad weird.

Everything is great except for the shape of the heads and the black girl's tiny neck. Good work.