Personally I pretty like it. It's not like best drawing in the art section but I like your style. It's very simple, straight pose and kind of straight environment. He's like waiting for a fucking hurtful shot and keep being concentrated. Really like how the gate is made ( the descending paint). The reflection on the glass is like in front of the left red bulb of the score signaler...that's the only thing I find incorrect in your art :P (Sorry for weak grammar, I doing my best).