Nice work! It's clear to me that you really challenged yourself with this piece, you're trying various advanced techniques which are really hard to get right, and while some areas aren't perfect, the ambition and care taken bring it to a level of which you should be proud. There are a few small things that are distracting, one is that the male's head is much larger than the females. Another is that she's holding the lighsaber towards the back end of the handle, which is a bit unusual. Other than me just being picky, you've done really well an should be very proud! Keep up the great work
Light Tickling
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Wanted to draw Mara Jade. Couldn't draw hair properly so left outline to keep komic-like style.
Steps: http://joe-4-kerr.deviant art.com/art/Light-Ticklin g-Steps-383639900?ga_subm it_new=10%253A1373228543&
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Sketching on stream: http://www.twitch.tv/snea ky4oe4rt/c/2501854
joe-4-kerr responds:
Thanks. Glad you finaly had time to tell me about what I've done. I've also noticed that Mara's neck is too thick. And I think that I like that style most. Simple enough, fives opportunity to keep sketchy outlines.
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