Hahah
Either she will slap you for making her look like that.. or she is even more uglier and will take this as a compliment.
Actual review... i am no great artist myself. I also have a hard time drawing women faces. But clearly i can see here you need to retouch a few things. First the hand looks deformed. Pay attention to the picture your basing this off and really go for detail. Her eyes look like she hasn't slept in a few days. Unless this is what her eyes look like (i hope not for the poor girl) Pay attention to the shape of her eyes and follow it better. Same for the nose and mouth. Not bad for starts though. The only way to increase your skills is to keep drawing... over and over and over and over.... till you die.