Pretty good

I like the art style. It's like an exaggerated kind of manga (if that's even possible). I do suggest that you work on your spelling, punctuation, etc. Since comics have constant dialogue, it needs to be written professionally to be taken seriously. The situation in this part is cliche, but if it goes somewhere unique, it'll work out fine. I suppose the background could use a little more work. Also, the grey "outline" of the speech and thought bubbles makes me a bit nauseous.