Good
I really like it. Kinda... David Firth-y
Good
I really like it. Kinda... David Firth-y
Well done, confusing title
I like the style and there doesn't seem to be anything out of place but the title. I don't get how his arm being burnt of relates to rape unless your referring to how in video games death= being raped.
Who's to say his arm was burnt? Someone could've removed his arm-skin with their penis for all you know. The title is meant to be thought provoking and make you wonder about what happened to his arm.
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