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Caroline Stomp

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So another Caroline drawing that was the result of Wednesday's live-stream. She gonna hurt peeps.

Caroline Soulfire (c) HowSplendid

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It's quite a nice piece man, you've done a solid job. I feel that you've done well on your expression, it gives me a sense of who your character is, and helps give some life to your piece. Overall a decently done piece.

Constructive criticism:

Shading/Light-source:

I feel that the shading is a tad simple, and might benefit from some softer blending; the shadows cut off too hard, which gives a kind of sharpness to your piece.

Furthermore, your light-source is a little all over the shop, it's at the same time as hitting the top of the hand, hitting the bottom of a foot. I think having a definitive lightsource would bring out this piece a lot more. Another thing that may benefit your piece is trying to allude to fur by shading the shadows in a hatch, rather than with erasing; so having small, closely placed dashes in a conforming direction.

This piece would also do well with a background to develop a bit more atmosphere. Though it already possesses personality with your facial expression and through the speech.

QuiteSplendid responds:

Thanks for the feedback. always appreciate it. I'll be sure to keep that in mind next time. I forgot to mention in the description that this was a quick digital drawing that I was working on. I decided not to fully refine it.

As for the fur shading, I only do that for the hair and tail.(didn't do it this time) and not for the rest of the body. I prefer not indicating my character's fur. it's a cartoon after all.

I'll take the backgrounds into consideration, but only add them as needed.

Thanks again.

BUT I GAVE YOU FULL SIZE CANDY BARS!!!

QuiteSplendid responds:

DDDDDDDDDDDDDIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEE! : D

Umm dude, it looks like a redrawn verion of the kick with a more miffed caroline still neat tho

QuiteSplendid responds:

you're right it is. I wanted to see if I could make it better than the other one. :)

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Nov 19, 2016
1:37 PM EST
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