All of your pieces tend to have this general feel to them, a feel that's missing in our world, creativity-wise. I'm STILL waiting for you to get snatched by some corporate dude who's very sole intent in life is to make you draw for him so he can stare at your stuff all day...
Whatever. I like the mysterious grin she has there, and the shadow that spawns from her adds a type of "finish" aura, especially since he bears that umbrella. Overall, this is just perfect, so 5's GALORE!!!