lol i hate coming up with titles XD

this is a great pic but for me on first looking at it i had trouble figuring out what was actually going on in the picture. . as far as anatomy is concerned id be interested in seeing how you start of your drawing whether you go straight in and draw the lines or if you draw shapes and faint lines to get everything in place.
it would be interesting to see this pic coloured =3

the torso and the neck look maybe too long but thats only if youre basing the figure of the human form. if it was like elfin or something then the length of the neck and torso would be fine =D

otherwise its a really great pic! keep up the good work =)

Yo!

you've got some great style! keep it up. yet I do have some concerns in the drawing. You have to somewhat work on the anatomy, I mean the belly button looks somewhat low and the her neck looks elongated. I'd love to see you add some different tones when shading the hair. All else is great though, I love the style and all the different things going on at once. So yeah keep it up and I hope to see more of your art.
CHiao!

Needs more dynamics...

...but thats better then what i can draw, so what do i know? Great detail!