Nice, but a tad boring.
Generally good attention to detail, a bit much on certain parts. A generic anime drawing and lacks depth. A relevent background could have really helped, and you should try to establish a point of view next time. Abel's pointing his gun rather lazily, fire that thing and his arm WILL (should) go flying. Actually, why's he pointing that thing in the first place? And at what? His eyes seem focused, but too bored to be pointing that. Also, is it just me or is his nose drawn pointing the wrong way?