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Satashi in Dersus city

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My OC Satashi city on a rooftop from Dersus city.

Dersus city is a fictional city I created, a city literally ruled by criminals and mob bosses.

Satashi is my oc of course.

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...And Satashi is a hot piece! The pose, expression, and environment are all really nice. I love your composition and how its busy, without being too cluttered. Just the right amount of gestalt my friend.

A critique however; your lighting is pretty wonky, and because of that, its noticeable that your picture is, indeed, made up of layers, rather than being a unified piece. Atmospheric light, despite the lighting in the background, should still play a part in your landscape; especially objects further away from the camera. You're also missing some lighting from the moon in there. Your lighting would then be less white, and more of a soft lighter blue; which I think could really help to push the depth in this piece.

Overall though, a great scene. It leaves a story to be told inside the viewers head. Keep up the good work!

Evil-Rick responds:

Thanks! Yeah, lighs are some of my weakness, but I'm trying to work it out, in this particulary pic I was looking forward to go deeper with backgrounds (yes, they're layers) which, if you look on my other pics, I don't do background sthat much, I also consider them to be my weakness and I'm trying to work that out. Thanks for the review!

Really not bad. Nice "ecchi" style.

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