Hmm...
I'm genuinely interested in what's going on, and I COMPLETELY support adventuring into comic production...but I got some beef with a couple of things.
I'm not sure if it's the scanner used or what it is, but the quality came out a bit blurry. Bottom right text box? I can't read it. It's like I'm trying to read something drunk :/
Additionally, when setting up the text box's position, try not to set them up at the very edge of the entire frame. Open up a comic book, any published comic book, and there's a border in between the text box and the edge of the page. It might not apply to the artwork, but that can sometimes be the case too...it just helps it feel organized.
I don't so much mind the handwriting except that it's very small. Viewed in full size, and I have the feeling that I'm over-focusing on the words...this COULD mean they might need to be a bit bigger and more legible, because if I'm having difficulty reading it, I know for a fact there's a few friends of mine with glasses that would have a really hard time.
I want to see this continued! I want to watch you and your work evolve! Please keep it up, and I hope I've been helpful. The tanks and jets look great! Color is unnecessary, not a lot of opportunity to show off environment, but in the next page it could be helpful to clearly establish the location.
