Now that is unique
Now here you have some very unique idea here and I don't think I have seen anything done like this at all on newgrounds so this was a pleasure the process is probably pretty intense and time consuming so very nice job indeed would love color but honestly this doesn't call for it and you have done pretty good with all that you have done here as for improvement I'm really stuck on this because it's on it's own creation and has it's own style so I'll leave this one alone
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes as this is a style and creative art of it's own kind
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