This is only the first page, see the whole comic here! :
http://www.georgeandpinhead.com/comic/funinthesun/

Yeah, I know it's been months since my last post, but I didn't want to half ass this one, at all.
I took all the advice and criticisms given to me and tried to apply it to this comic.

The one thing I did was I drew each image in the foreground and then shrunk them to fit in with their panels and in the background. I also took my time with the cleanups. I think it looks slightly better.