Looks pretty neat. It's nice to see some good pixel artists here.

I have a little thing or two to criticise at your art. First, those 2 black strings in the glass up there, looks quite unclear if these are cracks or something else in the glass and the second - sit back and look as far as possible on your work, if you don't see it, close your eyes until you see only a little gap of light and see on your work. You see what I see? Yeah, the body is way brighter than the whole head. I see you want to use a little bit of lightning works in there but you know, not the whole head is a shadow.

4/5 Stars
Good work! Keep going!

This is good, i think you should put more detail on it

Its pretty good. I think that there is a bit too much spacing wise at the bottom part of the helmet.
It make the whole thing look a bit "off."