I liked the characters design,the pose and the composition of the drawing...the tentacles have been placed well.the anatomy is good.just something that i noticed.either the paper smudges ur drawing...or u have been erasing stuff like the mouth,the feet and the upper torso a lot.(it isn't wrong to erase of course but if u draw a little lighter maybe it wont be visible)
and now for the things i liked other than the stuff above...the fins on her outfit,the necklace and how the lace is torn at the end.this is definitely worth completing...so go ahead :D