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Grattriss 2005

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Another something for Father's Day, same year (2005). Made in Fireworks.

There's a popular scratch card here in Sweden that goes by the name of Triss, and 'Congratulations' is 'Grattis' in Swedish. So, I mixed the two words, made a scratch card mock-up and attached a real scratch card within it. Also sent the idea to the company, but considering I'm not a millionaire yet I guess they weren't interested.

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Nice

Ok so what language is this? I feel like I need to get out google picture translator and investigate, but regardless it is a nice little addition. Is this a lottery card? I feel like it is but you need to add some $$$ signs into it to imply the winning of money, or maybe the symbol you used here is that sign? I am not too sure, but it does look good and has great symmetry overall. I think the orange and green coloring was good and the line work was good as well, but I wish the lines were thicker and heavy in some areas as the symbols themselves were heavy and thick and that should really match with the lines themselves, especially when you use the boxes or stratch box area with such a large thick line intself. I think that is really your main issue here to just keep things flowing in a nice way from line to line and not make it look like too much of a sketch if you want a realistic looking lottery card feeling here. Overall I did like this one and I hope you'll do more, but maybe an English version for us boys in the USA? Nice job tho.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just change up your border line thickness to match the boxes and give it a flow overall for this piece.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

If you read the description you'd know the answers to most questions above. ;) Good point with the winning implication though. The symbol's the official brand - 'triss' being a wordplay on three and clover/slang for money. Don't think a translated version would make much sense, and it's old work now, but thanks for the continued reviews!

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