Good drawing! I like the pose you chose for this piece, fits very nicely. But a couple of things to keep an eye out for:
1.The repeating gaps in the shading make this piece feel like it was rushed towards the end, you could have done a better job there :)
2.The the glasses feel obtrusive, a good way to go about improving this would be letting the lenses have more dimension - They look as though you could poke her right though them! Try coloring in some lenses :9
Hope you have a nice day :)
RikkeHansen Art Trade
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Here's my part of an art trade with RikkeHansen. :D I hope you like it! This was fun to do.
Based on: http://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/rikkehansen/good-weekend
GhoulKitten responds:
Thanks for the review! And yeah, I could've done a better job... D: And I've never drawn glasses before really, so I didn't know how to keep the glasses there, but not be THAT intrusive. But also being normal, non colored glasses. Hope you have a nice day too. :}
I really love the hair coloring and shading of the whole thing. Much nice. c:
GhoulKitten responds:
Thanks! :D
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