I like this one
A "SMUDGE" lol nice joke there, some added color on this would be a nice idea, Well that was a nice submittion of the comic, I can really see you building onto it aswell maybe a new character or two, or some side character, also more action and cliffhangar scenes would be a big plus too, but overall This was a good entry for the comic so nice job. I love how well these progress and cant wait for even more.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some added color on this would be a nice idea
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