Lineart seems good to me, the coloring, It is fairly good for being an experimental piece, the depth can see some improvement but I really hold no big or notable complaint. The facial expression and the clothes linings look awesome to me and I hope there's more experimentation and improvements upon your present works!! Keep up the good work ^^

perspective is a bit off on the gun but eh still good

Her skkin is too orange , and again lazy lineart job.