Pffft. XD I love it when dangerous things are mitigated by their own stupidity. It's interesting to see you tell a more direct story in your description instead of your normal poetry (not that your poetry is bad, by any means). I also enjoy how the girl is a spunky splash of color in the grey prison area. It really conveys her being a visitor, just passing through with her guide. Interesting use of perspective, too. I can't quite tell for sure, but am I right in thinking it's slightly off from "true" perspective?

I like how the one eye demon looks colorful a little.