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Woman In Red

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Really nice color scheme, and really nice line-work. Keep it up!

My first thought was Ada Wong from Resident Evil 2.

As noted before, very nice job on the body figure.

The left arm seems a bit strange with the muscle bulge on the up side. Also, the arms in general seem to become a bit too thick for the feminine body you have showing, though they would probably work better on a male character. Also try slimming down the fingers a bit.

For a different style, maybe try having her right hand holding the bag upward in a grasping motion, rather than downward.

I'm not entirely sure why, but when I look at the face it reminds me of one of those pictures with someone else's face photo-shopped to replace the actual pictures head. The coloration seems just slightly off on the face when compared with the rest of the body and the head seems too big to go with the rest of the figure.

I'd say you've got the right style, it just needs some more refinement.

You're getting there, man. Dude below summed up what I had to say pretty much word for word.

Please keep at it!

CalebJordan360 responds:

Yeah, its nice to have a community that actually helps build you up instead of tearing you down. This is why i love Newgrounds lol

Kinda... Keep trying though...Here is what I see wrong well not quite right: Face expression needs work (largely opinionated, but you're asking dude) more on the lips/mouth area needs development. The jaw is a lot too square/ man-ish not quite womanly or girly, arm with purse: needs some of work. First, forearm does not look quite right. Too curvy. Looks almost broken or deformed. And secondly, the hand needs more digits. Don't really recall that many gals holding a purse with just 2 fingers or 3 for the matter. I know of a dude who is stuck like that but that was a accident involving bad judgment and a bit of black powder. Not that many women though.
Your body design overall is good. So props there. Like I said keep trying dude. Close but not quite. Also attempt other poses...

CalebJordan360 responds:

Lol thank you! I'll try to fix these things in my next piece.

This look fine but still needs some work. The arms look odd especially the left one. In addition, her facial shape seems off. The rest of her looks good.

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