nice solid colours, is that copic? as for the linework, i like your style, but the lines have only two thicknesses (thick around the outline and thin inside the image). while this is aesthetically pleasing, you could raise it higher and experiment and taper thick lines on the inside more, wherever you feel needs it (such as where the chin ends under the fangs if that makes sense)

you're on the right track, i think we both approach art in a similar way, keep it up dude!!