great lighting awesome overall look

Nice

So this was a cool looking storm you have here the lighting rods should have more of a glow to them and even the eyes I thaught should have more of a glow as well but overall a good charchter here you filled the canvus very well and just made it look very well done

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more glow on the lighting rods and eyes

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very nice picture. Storm has never been one of my favourite x-(wo)men, however I love the juxtaposition of the dark colours with the lightness of her hair and the lightening bolt. Fantastic job.

Very impressive work! The pose is solid and sensual, and the color and light balance in particular are the highlight of this piece to me. It's clear to me that you really challenged yourself with this piece, you're trying various advanced techniques which are really hard to get right, and while some areas aren't perfect, the ambition and care taken bring it to a level of which you should be proud. Your piece holds its own fairly well in terms of its composition - the balance of where the viewerâEUTMs eye is drawn and how the piece is laid out is neat and compliments the image and style. You've done very well, thank you for sharing this with me! Keep it up!