Damn, your talented. Wish i could draw this good

Nicely done! Although I think the coloring could use a little work, I'm really digging the anime style. They're both cute and sexy. My one biggest beef is that you should have made the lineart a little thicker.

When you look at the rescaled preview version the line art is distorted pretty bad. By making the lineart a pixel or two larger it would have turned a good piece of work into a GREAT piece of work!

bomb drawing

It's good, I like them. You did an awesome job with their hair this time. Eyes are nice, bodies are good. Well, the right one's left hand... is in an interesting posture.
So, what anime/stuff are they from?

P.S: So you do commissions?

SKREW TOEI AND SHONEN! You are becoming spectacular at this and you're not even noticing! Your improvement surpasses anything I've ever freakin' seen. Body coloring is fantastic, line art is amazing, and the background is fine.
Frankly, I f'ing hate people who say they can't do something even though they have MEGA expectations for it. You really have a gift for this. If anime is more than a hobby to you, I say do it!