Not too bad, but keep working on it. I don't think there should be any visible lines going through or around the clouds (is this actually is the case with clouds up close then I think the lines should be thinner). The strange light in the upper right corner does add something to the picture because I could definitely picture the background being boring had nothing been there, but it looks out of place, like it really should be there. I was most impressed by the air; not in the detail, but in the idea. It may not be new, but your take on how it would look was interesting and the picture is atmospheric; the type of picture I like. Good work and I hope to see more from you.