Hm...
I'm not really sure what this submission actually is. Maybe you went off on something and then you quit halfway through, or maybe you rushed through it, but I found this submission to be way too dark for its own taste. It appears to be some sort of monster, but the the darkness takes away too much for you to really see. The red machine like light also doesn't really do anything for you, as it doesn't really clarify what the thing actually is. From my perspective it simply looks like a bunch of long mechanical rods or limbs that are floating out of clouds, not really something that spectacular.