I definitely like the direction that you're heading in with these characters. It feels like you're truly bringing together an interesting universe that is character and storyline oriented. I definitely enjoy some of that.
I appreciate how stylized all of these creations are- doubly so now that you've reconsidered how you draw the eyes and specifically the eye lashes. They were somewhat obnoxious but now they appear to be more 'appropriate' for lack of a better explanation.
I'm rather excited for what you have to offer. Keep at it.
-CO