I really like this. I think you've got talent but there are two things I picked up on that could make this piece even better if you improved them. The first is the straw because it's so bold and sharp I think it stands out too much and takes the focus away from the subject. secondly, I think if you could touch up on the bottom right of the dress/top then this piece would be a 5-star in my opinion. I'm sorry if what I said offends anyone but these are just my thoughts