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The Price she Paid

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A little while ago, I read an MLP fanfic called "The Price you Pay". It's not the best story ever, no offense to the writer, really. But reading it, it nearly made me cry. Really, it did.
Nearly. Very almost. My point is it was heart wrenching. So here is the scene that had me nearly very almost but not quite crying.

The fic can be read here http://www. fanfiction.net/s/7675865/
1/The_Price_You_Pay

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im a male but my little pony is awsome im clast as a brownie

I just read the fanfic and I still have tears trailing down my chin. You did a good job but I think the shading on RD looks a bit wierd.

AnglicanEnvoy responds:

Fair enough, there are some parts of the picture I would rather alter too. Glad you liked the fic though, it's one of my favourite MLP ones

Rainbow Dash is my personal love in the series.
I'm not sure it's because she's awesome or that there is another side of her, like a shy-ish comforting side.

Btw, if you read "My Little Dashie" while listening to "It Will Rain," by Bruno Mars, it will bring you to your knees, crying. Don't do it if you don't want to cry hard. Seriously, it's sad.

Great work you did here...
I gave the fanfic a try and it's great...
Maybe not the best I read...
But if you're in that kind of fanfics,
I suggest you a fanfic called : "My Little Dashie".
This fanfic just brought me to tears...
And don't, I reapeat, DON'T READ "CUPCAKES".
It's so... How'll tell you that...
"NOT FRIENDLY FOR YOUR BRAIN",
When I was reading it, I could imagine the pain
RD felt... every fricking bit of it... I can still see RD
being tortured by Pinkie's knife... I can hear the screams...
So don't read it... save your filly head and don't read it...
But I still recommened readinng "My Little Dashie"...
Don't worry... "My Little Dashie" and "Cupcakes" have
nothing in common... "My Little Dashie" is a sad fanfic
about Rainbow Dash coming to Earth and being raised be a human,
And "Cupcakes" is about Pinkie Pie torturing Rainbow Dash and then
making cupcakes out of her corpse... sorry if I wrote a bit to much...
I will trully appreciate it if you'll read my comment and reply to it...
SO... What can I say... "Brohoof"?

AnglicanEnvoy responds:

Oh I've read both of those. I even rewrote Cupcakes. I do love a little macabre you know.

Don't get me wrong though. Rainbow dash is my favourite character in MLP, she is, and I would never wish that sort of treatment upon anyone in real life. But I liked Cupcakes.

Don't worry about my brain, I assure you my nerves are reasonably strong ^^

not bad but WTF did you do to RD? she looks terrible!

AnglicanEnvoy responds:

Ah, well in the fanfic that this is based on, Rainbow outlives the rest of the mane six, and is thus very old during the scene that this picture is depicting.
If you give it a read, you'll understand what I mean

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