I like the lighting and the feeling it gives the background.
I think that you can fix/improve the area of neck and shoulders, it feels with a long width and that is a characteristic more of men than women. Also, the legs are so long, but despite the disproportion, she looks good :)
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It's finally done. Here's my Halloween poster of the succbus pinup that I'm gonna be printing out. Exciting stuff. This took sooooo long because I kept finding mistakes, but then I realized that I should just move on. So that's exactly what I did! Lesson learned. Critique is fine I guess? CLICK TO EXPAND THE PICTURE, YO!
paperspine responds:
Thanks for the crit! :) I agree, there was a lot of difficulty with fine-tuning the neck and shoulder areas. The legs weren't immediately on my radar, but thanks for pointing that out. I'll keep that stuff in mind next time.
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