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March 2010 (1st Verse)
May 2013 (Graphic and 2nd Verse)
Need a better font for the text, that match with the atmosphere of the pic... =)
Thank you for taking the time to review. My typography choice (for me) speaks to the mechanical nature of typewriters and large organizations [in my case, the military]. However, I do agree that it does not flow in the same vein as the atmospherics, et al. If you would like a version with different type work specifically, please message me and I might be able to be of service.
Dood, I love your work.
...but the motivational, text/pic things are getting old. :\
Thank you for taking the time to review, but I am curious as to what you find motivational. The overwhelming majority of the 284 (and growing) pieces of this series are largely focused on the consequences of war, loneliness, and life as a wounded man: to include this piece as well. Perhaps with the exception of the very last two lines, I would say there is little motivating about either half of this piece in general. I hope, instead, the 'getting old' is a lack of being able to relate: of which I would be grateful. I, and many like me, would prefer no one else to share our experiences. If you have, I apologize with all I am and would then include you in my memorial day thoughts in the future as well.
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