for a first try this is really good the only thing that could have used work is the girls head for it looks a tad beefed up and her nose could be cleaned a little more for the tip of her nose looks a tad odd with that diffrent color looking like she was sick or she had a nose job.... also i note that there ears are a tiny bit pointed but i can get over that... but i have to say i do like this... there facial expression is what it should be and it is very sentimental so nice job on your first try and keep it up