I'm really starting to understand your style now. I will admit to being confused about this. I wish you had told us what the poem was about! You know, maybe just write it here. Or was it too long? This is a fairly creative picture.
I do love the colors being used. You're really good with purple. I think that's his mouth and not an arm coming out. Are those all his legs? I guess they could be used as arms in theory.